高分必備-雅思大作文Opinion Essay(觀點(diǎn)類作文)的寫(xiě)作秘笈
1. Opinion essay
此類作文主要考查考生陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的能力。
想要獲得高分,考生需清晰地闡明理由,使用相關(guān)例子去論證其觀點(diǎn)。
2. Opinion essay常見(jiàn)的提問(wèn)方式:
1)What is your opinion?
2)Do you agree or disagree?
3)To what extent do you agree or disagree?
4)Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
5)To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
例題:
Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
3. 題目分析:
每個(gè)雅思作文題目都包含一個(gè)主題(topic)和一個(gè)問(wèn)題(question)。
寫(xiě)作時(shí)務(wù)必要著重圍繞該主題和問(wèn)題去寫(xiě),才能在task response(任務(wù)完成度)一項(xiàng)獲得6分或更高的分?jǐn)?shù)。
如上面的例題里,第一句為主題,第二句是問(wèn)題。
主題:Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families.
主題句里有并列連詞and,那么記得and連接的兩個(gè)方面都要寫(xiě)到,即fast pace 和stress of modern life都要寫(xiě)。
問(wèn)題:To what extent do you agree or disagree?
回答這個(gè)問(wèn)題有2個(gè)要求:
1)必須表明你是否同意(agree or disagree);
2)在多大程度上同意或不同意(the extent/how much you agree or disagree)。
為突出你的觀點(diǎn)立場(chǎng),建議在開(kāi)頭段和結(jié)尾段都提及自己的立場(chǎng)。
如果是100%同意或不同意的話,可以用totally 或completely agree/disagree;如果是部分同意或不同意,可以用somewhat或partly表明自己的立場(chǎng)。
盡量避免50%同意或不同意,否則會(huì)導(dǎo)致你的立場(chǎng)不夠說(shuō)服力或不夠明確。
4. 作文布局
1)用下劃線畫(huà)出主題句里的重點(diǎn)詞匯,并用相關(guān)近義詞作替換。
如上面例題中,重點(diǎn)詞匯及其替換詞:fast pace (high-speed), stress (pressure), modern life (contemporary lifestyles), negative (harmful), effect (influence), families (family life)。
2)判斷是哪種提問(wèn)類型。
To what extent do you agree or disagree? = say how much you agree or disagree
3)快速頭腦風(fēng)暴,簡(jiǎn)要列出同意或不同意的關(guān)鍵論點(diǎn):
Agree with negative effect on families:a) less time for families to be together;b) arguments among family members
Disagree with negative effect on families:a) be forced to cooperate more, which brings them closer together
4)闡明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)立場(chǎng) (totally agree, somewhat agree, somewhat disagree, totally disagree)
闡明個(gè)人的立場(chǎng),無(wú)須兩邊都論述,只需按自己覺(jué)得更好寫(xiě)的一邊論述即可。當(dāng)然,你也可以選擇部分同意或不同意,兩邊都論述,最后闡明更傾向于哪一邊觀點(diǎn)也可。
5)敲定作文結(jié)構(gòu)
根據(jù)自己的立場(chǎng),在作文主體部分(body of the essay)就應(yīng)先論述你更支持那一邊的觀點(diǎn)論據(jù),然后按論據(jù)由強(qiáng)到弱去布局主體部分。
5.作文寫(xiě)作步驟
一旦有了結(jié)構(gòu)布局,就可以動(dòng)手寫(xiě)了。
1)復(fù)述題目
根據(jù)上面的重點(diǎn)詞匯替換,把原題目重寫(xiě)一次,但記得不要一字不漏抄寫(xiě)!一定要替換復(fù)述!這樣才能在有限的作文字?jǐn)?shù)里體現(xiàn)你的vocabulary and grammar水平。
Many people feel that family life is being harmed by the high-speed and pressure of contemporary lifestyles.
2)闡明立場(chǎng)(totally/strongly/somewhat+agree/disagree)
在開(kāi)頭段闡明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)立場(chǎng)以及簡(jiǎn)明理由。
I somewhat agree with this opinion because the fast pace leads to less time for families to be together, stress leads to arguments among family members; however, due to the increased time pressure and stress families are forced to cooperate more, which brings them closer together.
3)主體部分
主體部分一般由2-3段組成,具體可按所列的論點(diǎn)分段論述。
每個(gè)主體段應(yīng)以主題句開(kāi)頭,后接支持該主題句相關(guān)的解釋說(shuō)明(explanation)、例子(example)或細(xì)節(jié)(details)。
4)結(jié)尾部分
用概括性的詞語(yǔ)(In conclusion/To summarize等)引出結(jié)尾段,然后總結(jié)個(gè)人立場(chǎng)和所論述的觀點(diǎn)論據(jù)。
6.Opinion essay作文模版
P1. Introduction
I totally agree/disagree with this opinion because … (理由1+理由2).
P2. Body
The main reason why I believe/don’t believe XXX is because … (理由1).
P3. Body
Another reason why I support/don’t support the notion that XXX is due to the fact that… (理由2).
P4. Conclusion
In conclusion, I completely agree/disagree that XXX because (改述理由1) and (改述理由2).
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